I have written a story which you people could find out way down the archives.. Now its time, I post a poem which I wrote.. And yeah, this is my first one ;) ... Well, I actually wrote this almost an year back.. I happened to see this again when I was browsing the files in my computer and hence I am posting it here !! ;)
In my heart, I feel a great pain ;
Dunno whether she'll let me explain !!
My heart always beat for her ;
I just don't wanna live without seeing her !!
I am just not able to express ;
But sure, I wanna impress !!
I just wanna walk with her in the rain;
Sharing our joy and pain !!
Without talking, I can't sleep for a night ;
Its like spending a day without a light !!
Oh lord !! I am waiting for a chance ;
For me n her to dance !!
I always want her to smile ;
It's a great pleasure seeing that for a while !!
I only see her, whenever I close my eyes ;
Guess she is an angel in disguise !!
Always around her, my heart swirls;
Because she is just the BEST among all the girls !!
I dunno much about poetry.. These were just random thoughts which I had put down in the form of a poem.. Your comments are welcome !!! Ciao !! :)
2 "2 Cents":
yeah.. it was more like prose with rhyming words..
good try nonetheless
Nice....Not at all bad for a first timer. Congrats on the accomplishment :)
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